Comments:
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Jonathan White:
Good start, but it needs to have more finished line art.
Marin Elise:
Rough lines but terrific motion and feel. The little leg kick that she does is a wonderful acting moment.
John Alston:
Incomplete short has inanimate key poses- I really think the only advice is to think about the deadline next time around and carve out more time.
Animator: Divi
Description: A dad talking to his daughter
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 6 hours