John Alston:

If "motion comic" is the aesthetic the animator was going toward, I'd watch that graphic novel.

If there was a "professional, but a bit bland" category for the actual mechanics, I'd put that in there, but the lighting/atmosphere are quality.

Bonnie:

this is great story telling. the main thing id add to is exaggerating the expressions as right now they feel slightly too flat. good work none the less.

Peggy Tsai:

the vibes are immaculate and the animation is really good!

Jenna Liesman:

Visual design is stellar! I'd love to see more inbetweens and body movement.