Comments:
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Tykia Lumpkin:
Though there is barely any expressions in here, the animation and the body movements speaks for the piece itself! Wonderful all around!
artchoke:
I think even some simple faces would've helped your animation here, but I think the body language and framing are really good!
Kara Lawson:
this is so beautiful. I love the scene setting and felt for the characters in such a short time. Would love to see a complete version.
John Alston:
It's weird, because I do think the "Glen Keanesque" body language is impressive, but it does seem like an excuse to not lipsync.
Annabelle Valkhoff:
beautiful! body movements are so good just wish I could see the lip sync - would love to see it finished :)
Animator: Jenna Liesman
Description: Elias and Dahlia (father and daughter) reflecting on the loss of Delphine, beloved wife and mother. We see a young Dahlia fiddling with her mother's necklace.
A work in progress, clearly; I intend to up my speed (and completion) in future months!
Experience: ~1 year self-taught, 3 in college
Time taken: An estimated 30 hours at least (I'll keep better track next time)