Comments:
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Mary Shaw:
Maybe more mouth movement. But I like the character designs! :)
John Alston:
Blinks are hard to do, and hard to do right, and I respect the animator for trying to incorporate it into the movement, but I think it is done too much.
I'll admit that I tend to have characters blink when I don't know what to do, but what I try to do is let the eyebrows lead.
I also think the girl's hair should bob a little when she talks, to sell the sort of mechanics/weight.
OliyideDemilade:
The Characters are a bit stiff but apart from that its ok.
Animator: Yasemin Kutan
Description: Girl sad about coffee fortune
Experience: Not a lot
Time taken: 15 hours