Comments:
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Hugo Composti:
Hey ! Good poses but be careful about the lip sync ! Keep it up !
Vanessa Gonzalez:
I think the overall animation could be a little more exaggerated. Not too much, because I like the tone you were going for, but with a little more movement on the head and a bit more exaggeration on his lips when he pronounces the words this piece could be way stronger. Other than that it's pretty good.
Mike M.:
The lip sync is off.
Beau Hall:
The words are there - but barely. Not a lot of movement at all - blow it all up bigger.
Jasmine Moody:
Nice and subtle facial animation.
Lukasz Wenc:
lipsync is off
Ryan D Lowe:
For a shot this tight, that lip sync has to be spot on. This however needs a lot of work. Your shapes need exaggerated. I like the motion on the head. I feel the sadness.
Aaron Clement:
Nice subtle expressions and acting. Lypc sync is a bit off. Good job on toning this down, though.
Danny Kneip:
The high camera angle is an interesting choice here. The lip sync needs a bit of polishing.
Animator: Ivan Elizalde
Description: Even if he wants to, he has to keep it secret. For their own good.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 48 hours