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Don't look into in.....

by RAHUL SHARMA

Final Rating: 5.71. Finished 28 out of 162 entries.

68 views including the voting period.

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Animator: RAHUL SHARMA

Description: After drink character could not tolerate any one's interference.....and when its all done... giving advice...

Experience: Here it doesn't matter

Time taken: still working

Comments:

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Vanessa Gonzalez:

Great animation! My only critique would be to sync his mouth better with the audio. It seems like the mouth shapes are correct except for the timing. For example, when he says "expression" I could hear the "p" before I saw his lips pronouncing it.

Aaron Clement:

I did a gun shot, too. Love the creativity in this. Stands out from the others.

Jez:

another smart drunk this time talking to a complete blackout drunk...good animation

Amartya Mukherji:

There is scope for improvement. camera movement is not helping, remove it or smooth it down.

Jasmine Moody:

Really liked it. Nice work!

Kartick Pramanik:

NICE ANIMATION

PRIYA RANJAN DEB:

ba ba, ki darun hoyeche.

Joyabrata Saha:

camera can be lil slow i guess

Ryan D Lowe:

Great acting beats here. Simple and powerful. The lip sync is your biggest opportunity.

Richard Clark:

From 125-134; I would show more of a arc in the motion and it's too abrupt. Give an ease in and out on that. From 141-157; I would add a secondary rotation action here. I would not ease into the glass he's holding hitting the table around 186. I would let that hit harder.

Danny Kneip:

The audio is amazing!

Eshan:

Clean animation!