Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement:

Good. Maybe hold the camera a little longer on the cow at the beginning.

Jez:

Oh I'am reminded that's my entry ... thanks I would not notice it ....LOL ... I would vote to never wash my eyes again.... wink, wink ...Then again I'd seen it so many times over the last weekend when i did it so no surprises for me & my eyes ... mainly the story I was after....hope you liked it >:oD

Amartya Mukherji:

DON'T TAMPER THE AUDIO ...

Jim P:

wow, you drew 2 pictures (one with and without the gun), panned, and animated the mouths. It gives me inspiration. seriously. Good job.

Richard Clark:

you need to do more than just move the mouth...