Per Cardell:

The smoking man's performance is good, and interrupted by the gun-man covering him.

Benjamin Berg:

I can't say too much about the animation. A lot of it is covered up by the smoke and lighting. I would have just playblasted the animation so that the animation would be more visible.

Aaron Clement:

Nice. Great ending.

Sai Srikanth Charepalli:

I liked your animation and those subtle camera movements. Overall....what to say......you did a good job!!

Amartya Mukherji:

Liked the staging. animation is also good. but lighting is spoiling the expressions

Abhishek Banerjee:

good acting

Matt Horstman:

Scout's acting was super good. The smoke particle distracted from his mouth movement.

Ryan D Lowe:

Great work here. Acting is solid throughout. Would like to see the second character open up a bit more though. Too tight on his shot. Awesome lip sync!

Robert Holmen:

The shadow that his nose casts at about frame 100 looks very odd. His face needs a fill light to diminish that.

Danny Kneip:

The camera movement is extremely distracting because the background (city street) doesn't move. The speaking character is mostly in shadow and the lip sync, as well as expression, are hard to read. The hand gesture on "sleeping dogs lie" is nicely done, but I wish the non-speaking character was looking down at that gesture on the cut, and then looks up with his confused expression, which is well done.

Noyan Özkan:

wow, i was almost going to do the exact the same concept with 2 characters.