Comments:
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Per Cardell:
??!! hehe.
Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Aaron Clement:
Felt like my attention was divided at the beginning with too much movement from both. Ramp up the talking (lead) guy to he grabs my attention... a bit vanilla.
Amartya Mukherji:
poor... Sorry :(
J.K. Riki:
It's a starting place! Now get some animation in there, and work on your design and poses. Good luck in future entries!
Danny Kneip:
Pure nonsense! Calorie counting only works properly if you show the serving size!!
Animator: Yew Chen Rou
Description: A is eating a bowl of ice cream, B studies the calorie content beside A and shocked to discover how high it is.
Experience: Still a student
Time taken: 1 day