Sylwia Bomba:

It's really good! But I think you should work more on lipsync

Per Cardell:

Keep animating!

Aaron Clement:

Expression, lie, off... isn't working for me in the lip sync. Love the idea and creativity in this.

Matt Horstman:

Some lip sync issues. I like his body language.

Vanessa Gonzalez:

I think the lip sync distracts from the rest of the animation. There are some places where he closes his lips completely even though there isn't a "b", "p" or "m" sound and the timing is also off. If you were to finish this animation I'd consider working on the lip sync first. The rest is pretty good.

Ryan D Lowe:

Love that transition to SL at F30. Lip sync is the biggest opportunity!

Amartya Mukherji:

good try but Needs a lot of improvement

Richard Clark:

Lip sync needs improving on. It pops at times and needs to be more refined in certain areas. I would delay the licking of the lips a bit more as well...right now it's too close to the dialogue. It should have a beat first before you go into it.

Danny Kneip:

The mood is nice, as is his expression throughout, but the lip sync needs much more attention.