Vanessa Gonzalez:

I think the only issue I have is that it doesn't seem finished, otherwise I think I could've probably given you better feedback.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement:

A bit floaty. Needs more moving holds (phrasing). Has potential.

srinivasarao:

needs improve a lot.

Amartya Mukherji:

Needs a lot of improvement

Richard Clark:

Work on timing...everything looks floaty

Thomas Edward:

Solid effort! Practise your inbetween animation, it looks quite floaty at the moment.