Comments:
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:
I like the idea!! :)
but i guess the poses are not clear enough.
f.e.: frame 108 - he looks disappointed for no reason. and his switch from shy to evil is not motivated.
Aaron Clement:
Good creativitly. Needs work on the body mechanics.
Amartya Mukherji:
Nice try ... There is scope for improvement.
Danny Kneip:
So many gestures, so little motivation.
Ryan D Lowe:
Too many ideas shoved into one acting beat. Subtle going forward and try to line it up with just a single idea.
Robert Holmen:
He's overacting.
Richard Clark:
acting is a little over the top. Should dial that back. It's also too pose to pose.
Animator: David Vann
Description: A suspicious character emerges from his house to explain the scene.
Experience: Final year student studying animation at Bradford University
Time taken: 2 Weeks