Final Rating: 3.32. Finished 140 out of 162 entries.

19 views including the voting period.


Animator: nabil

Description: A husband's tale after commenting on his wife's recipe

Experience: 3 months

Time taken: 4 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Vanessa Gonzalez:

I think you could've given the older man a little more expression on his face; I'm not sure if he was disappointed or sad.

Sergio Candela Ramirez:

If feel that both are very static...


needs allot more polish but nice set!

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement:

A bit floaty. Original.

Richard Clark:

Wow! another "picking of the nose" piece...