Comments:
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Per Cardell:
Hehe. The basic blocking is there. It just needs to be taken some steps further. Keep going!
Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Aaron Clement:
Nice lighting and textures. Not sure about the ending. Acting seems ok, though.
Jasmine Moody:
I feel it really didn't need to cut to the other person.
Amartya Mukherji:
funny but Needs a lot of improvement
Animator: Thomas Edward
Description: The stirring advice that comes from the bottom of the glass. Or doesn't.
Experience: ~3 years on and off
Time taken: 1 day