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Attempt to explain

by Valentin

Final Rating: 5.00. Finished 56 out of 162 entries.

33 views including the voting period.


Animator: Valentin

Description: A man tries to confess something to his son but...

Experience: 5 years as a robot animator

Time taken: 10 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Aaron Clement:

Nice ending.

Jasmine Moody:

Nice acting choices


Needs to improve the acting.

Vanessa Gonzalez:

Pretty good animation! My only 2 suggestions would be to work more on the lip sync and to maybe add just a tad of movement during his holds, or pauses. The holds and pauses themselves are good but I think he's a little too still, if you just add a little bit of movement it would look even better than it already does. Good job :)

Ryan D Lowe:

Great solid hand gestures/body work here. Love his thought process as well. Solid DECENT here.

Amartya Mukherji:

good. nice and smooth.
But it is very pose to pose. lacks drama. You can blend your acting a bit more and fine-tune it further.

Emily Rose Gerich:

Lovely, though the lip sync needs more 'punch'/exaggeration, and be sure to use the eye brows to give him come life!

Danny Kneip:

It's a good performance overall, though the hand gestures could be toned down in the middle. I like the sync and the concern the speaker has. I also like the direct eye contact.