Aaron Clement:

Not bad.

Ryan D Lowe:

Needs another good pass focusing on weight and body mechanics. Great work with the wood whittling and knife rubbing.

Robert Holmen:

I think he's got silhouette problems.

Amartya Mukherji:

Wow. nice. the camera and acting is so good. Can be polished a bit more though. before he says "your.. you are better off.." there is a look at with a head movement. that seems to be a little jerk in it. you can remove it or soften it. :)