Comments:
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Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
James Van Dam:
Make sure everything is out of stepped animation and splined. Also remember fallow though and overlapping action.
Amartya Mukherji:
There is a lot of scope for improvement. Try to figure out the timing after you visualize the acting you want to do, then start animating a shot. Shooting your own video reference would help you a lot.
Danny Kneip:
Keep trying!
Aaron Clement:
A bit poppy and linear. I don't get the smile at the end.
Animator:
Description: My first time participating in the competition. It gave me motivation to keep working, and I had fun.
Experience: 2 years, student
Time taken: 10 days