Comments:
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Per Cardell:
I wish to see more animation in this. I also get curious wondering with whom he is talking - and the idea behind the acting you have in mind whilest doing this animation. Keep it up!
Vanessa Gonzalez:
The animation is good, but aesthetically speaking, the left half of the screen looks a little too busy, I was expecting someone to walk by or pop out or something. Since it doesn't really serve any purpose, maybe next time focus a little bit more on the talking character, otherwise the audience might get distracted.
Amartya Mukherji:
Nice ... There is lot of scope for improvement. WORK ON THE EXPRESSIONS :)
Ryan D Lowe:
Simple. But decent lip sync. Would of loved to see more though process.
Aaron Clement:
A bit floaty. I don't get the punch line.
Danny Kneip:
The sync is fairly good, as is the eye movement, though I think he holds his eyes closed a little too long starting about F110. Seems unmotivated. However, if the eyes closed were paired with a slight head shake, slumped shoulders or whatever to sell the mood, it could work. Get the entire body into the action and you'll really have a stronger foundation.
Richard Clark:
He pretty much stays in the same pose. I would brainstorm a bit more to come up with something to change his posture at times.
Babul Prasad:
Its nice but need a lot improvement
Animator: Clinton Principe
Description: Haha had fun doing this piece wish I could've worked on it more and I probably will on my spare time.
Experience: Almost 2 Years as a Student
Time taken: A week and a half on and off