Per Cardell:

It looks like the actor is rehersing this little speach before delivering it. If that is the idea behind this piece I like some of the stuff in your performance. You could work more on the graphs to avoid static poses. Keep it up!

Caleb Rankin:

I really like your body animation. The mouth could use some work, try tightening the lips on the O and Ooo shapes.

Aaron Clement:

A little floaty. Good staging.

Jasmine Moody:

I think it needed more expression.

srinivasarao:

flat acting needs to improve alot

Ryan D Lowe:

This is nice. That hand on SR needs to be staged a bit more to the right so it doesn't lose that figure/shape/silhouette. It will read better!

Amartya Mukherji:

you could have pushed the graphs a little more. specially the eye brows

Danny Kneip:

Decent sync. The character expressions are fairly tame - he seems ambivalent toward what he's saying. Good little bounce in the fingers.