Per Cardell:

Haha! Great.

Hanung Lee:

careful with your eye direction.

Liviu Boar:

I really liked the part where he put his hat on, very natural

mithun:

char looks more stiff

Richard Clark:

The hand contacts on the girl's shoulder needs better placements and finesse. Looks like it's at a blocking stage. Overall, I think you need to continue finessing everything and add more subtle movement to the girl. At times she's completely still. It would be nice to see her react more to the male. For instance, have her turn her head slightly towards the male when he walks off. Also, the male's movement at the end should flow better. His movement hits a wall at 166

Ryan D Lowe:

Nice acting here, and great work keeping it simple and subtle.

Amartya Mukherji:

needs to be refined but it has a lot of potential.

Casey Colledge:

A couple things I think could help this. The female character is very stiff throughout. Adding some slight weight shifts or some turn of the head. Just something to give her some life. The other thing, kind of nit picky, but when the guy says "...sleeping dogs lie." His whole body goes freezes. The character should never completely stop moving.