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Animator: Felipe Molica

Description: A father warns his kid.

Experience: around 2 years

Time taken: 3 weeks (part time)

Comments:

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Per Cardell:

It is not easy to be a child. I like the idea.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement:

Love it... not sure about the close up on the lips, tho.

Vanessa Gonzalez:

Not bad, however the watermark on the video is a little distracting.

Joyabrata Saha:

not up to the mark

Richard Clark:

The pose on both characters at the end could be improved on. I've never seen anyone stand like that. And the baby is too upright. Add a little bend to his spine.

Danny Kneip:

Bizarre choice with the close-up. The baby is frozen in time and doesn't compliment the lead character, who is decently animated.