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Ganster's Paradox


Final Rating: 4.63. Finished 77 out of 162 entries.

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Description: A lamenting gangster has bitter words with the body he's just buried. Tried having a go with some more subtle movements with this one.

Experience: Not nearly enough

Time taken: 2 weeks around work and study


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Ryan D Lowe:

Great work here, but the character barely moves. Good use of the face however! I liked a bit of what you did there.

Aaron Clement:

Decent. Lighting is a bit dark at the beginning. I like the subtleness of this. Good facial expressions. Love the ending.

Muhammad Arsal:



Have I said already about those dark almost no lighting 3d animation scenes ? Oh yes I have.

Amartya Mukherji:

Needs a lot of improvement

Thomas Edward:

Nice subtle animation going on here, but a little hard to see it if your lighting's too dark!

Danny Kneip:

A pretty good sync, nice cuts and camera movement. The slumping of the character at the end is an interesting choice. Not showing the light source is a smart idea - visible headlights would have been awfully cliche, but I wish the back light on the character was stronger. At F107, the eyeball is nearly rolled back into the skull, and that could have been avoided. Overall, a good entry.