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Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Aaron Clement:
A little floaty. Good posing.
Amartya Mukherji:
There is a lot of scope for improvement. Try to figure out the timing after you visualize the acting you want to do, then start animating a shot. Shooting your own video reference would help you a lot.
srinivasarao:
dull acting.....needs to improve alot.
Danny Kneip:
Interesting composition and lighting. Nice strumming of the fingers, but probably 2 strums would have sufficed. The lip sync is a tad off, but there's good potential here.
Richard Clark:
To floaty...work on timing.
Thomas Edward:
Perhaps adjust your lighting for this shot - it's a bit hard to read the dark character against the black background.
Kartick Pramanik:
you should scale down eleven charector head............then only its look adult guy.
Animator: Patrick Høiseth
Description: Someone is called in for a intimate interview.
Experience: Recently graduated
Time taken: 1 week