Final Rating: 2.88. Finished 149 out of 162 entries.

31 views including the voting period.


Animator: Dominica

Description: This is my first entry ever and also my first animation in maya. Feedback would be highly appreciated!

Experience: tutorial-watching-and-self-teaching-game-animator-in-the-making

Time taken: 7h


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Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement:

Nice staging. a bit linear. When the guy stands up he needs to adjust his weight.

Ranvir Singh:

Basic animation principles are not there.....

Roger Crown:

Please note that you have one chance and one chance only with a paying audience for char's to read against the background, or anything that the char's hold in their hands, paws, etc...make sure it reads clearly as this rose does not on the first viewing for me....

Amartya Mukherji:

Lacks fundamentals