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Per Cardell:
I wonder why she wanted to come to that party?
Lwaxana:
The concept here is great. The man's acting as he starts pretending to work is very convincing. I love how that supports the concept of him as a disgruntled employee who has outbursts. All the characters seem to be thinking and reacting convincingly according to their character/role. Really nicely done!
Celia Bullwinkel:
Awesome rigs!
David Vann:
Love it... the funniest and most creative take on the audio clip by a mile and you know that something is up by the characters body language before the second character is even seen. And the person in the background.. amazing. Only thing I can notice that may improve it slightly would be by adding a tiny bit more subtle movement in the pauses between poses. Great Job!!
Blond:
great one!
Aaron Clement:
Nice acting/timing. I like it!
Anurag Sahu:
nice...... decent animation
Ryan D Lowe:
This is terrific work. The lip sync would be the only critique I have here. Great work!
Amartya Mukherji:
awesome expressions and acting.. the reaction of the girl is so nice.
Richard Clark:
Some good stuff in here... From 43-59; his right hand is locked onto one position. You should add some subtle secondary motion there. His body hits a wall at frame 61. I would work on your follow-through here. The girls pose at 151 could be a little better. I would just have her left hand down to her side instead and relate it to your line of action. I love the lean in when he says "lie." Nice job there! I don't think you need to crumble the paper at the end. It's too distracting. It looks like a mistake. Overall, I think you should continue to refine the smaller stuff like finger motions and follow-throughs. Sometimes I see things just going from pose to pose. Try to avoid that.
J.K. Riki:
Really nicely done! Good movements, good poses, nice little story. The only thing that bugs me a lot is there's no sound to go along with him snatching the paper from the girl. I'd go back and add that in if you want to put this in a reel or something, because it's missing that SFX. Obviously you can't add things to the 11 Second Club entries, but you can alter it afterward if you want! I think it would add a ton to this if it had a corresponding sound effect. Nice work!
Danny Kneip:
Nice character performances. The lip sync seems weak in areas, but overall, a memorable piece.
Animator: Gabriel Garcia Poignet
Description: The day after an office party, some people due to their hangover are particularly in a bad mood...
Experience: 9 years
Time taken: 15 days