Final Rating: 4.08. Finished 108 out of 162 entries.

22 views including the voting period.


Animator: Sankeerna y

Description: grandpa giving lecture to tired warrior

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 2 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

James Van Dam:

I like your setting and the black and white ascetic, but you should be more zoomed on your talking character. I can barley see his face/movements.

Casey Colledge:

Would be nice to see a close up of the guy talking. Right now it's hard to tell who is speaking and what is going on.

Ryan D Lowe:

This whole shot would work sooo much better if you reversed angles on the character. Have the main character be front to camera, and have the soldier screen right with the same motions. It would read a lot better! Main character goes rigid stiff after F102

Richard Clark:

You need to pull the camera in so that we can see the performance better


The character is way too far from camera.. can barely see him