Comments:
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Per Cardell:
Good. You put something together. This is just the beginning of your animation journey. Keep'em coming!
Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Aaron Clement:
A bit linear and back and forth. Nice staging. Love the moody lighting.
Stas Bolotine:
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Dhruvil:
Too floatyyyyy
Amrithraj:
You have to hold in your poses Strongly.The is poses you
did is Good but its not at all registering in eyes.Any way good
effort.
Dean Mosier:
There's too much movement going on and his actions don't seem normal.
Babul Prasad:
too much unnecessary movements
Animator: XuDong
Description: hope u like it
Experience: student
Time taken: 2weeks