Comments:
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Eric Raffle:
not enough motion or expression its very linear
Dalton Krajewski:
The animation looks very nice and cohesive, but the movements seem very puppet-like in the sense that the mouth moves independently of the rest of the face and the limbs seem to act independently as well. Having more follow-through, such as the motion starting in a certain place like the shoulder and carrying the attached pieces with it, would make the character feel much more alive--coupled with some more dynamic poses.
Carolyn Mennecke:
His head bobs a lot, and his other arm should move more. Be expressive!
Animator: P Carey
Description: Man in office gives advice
Experience: some
Time taken: Off and on couple weeks.