Comments:
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Lia Rothschild:
Needs some broader gestures!
Pauline Champetier:
Some nice touches in the hand gestures ! However in my opinion he doesn't look very in the middle of a thinking process, he seems to be reading the article and saying a line written on it.
Gayle Yeier:
I love her subtle actions in relation to his. Both characters are activated. I feel like there could be some more upper body movement with the ups and downs in the actors voice. Otherwise this is nicely animated, and nice staging.
Hailee Pullman:
Great acting and animation.
Carolyn Mennecke:
Have the man look at the woman more often - it looks like he's reading a manuscript instead of emphasizing the article Jimmy found. Also, the woman doesn't look understanding when she says "I understand." Have the expression match the dialogue!
Animator: Dui Oray
Description: an untimely visit to the hospital to read his client's letter
Experience: 2 years as a student in 3D
Time taken: about 40 hours