Final Rating: 2.26. Finished 132 out of 138 entries.

385 views including the voting period.


Animator: Bks

Description: Offering advice

Experience: zero

Time taken: 1 month


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Pauline Champetier:

I think you're loosing a bit the viewer with so many cuts not justified by the story. In a movie, every shot has its own meaning, and something happening in the frame triggers each cut.

Steven GUardado:

too blocky.

Dalton Krajewski:

The poses were very expressive and the tempo was varied nicely, but the transitions seem a bit poppy and the mouth doesn't match up to the dialog very well. Having some more extreme mouth poses and synchronizing it to the dialog a bit more carefully would help immensely.

Carolyn Mennecke:

This is jerky, the poses make no sense, and the camera angles are confusing

Matthew W. Nuttall:

To much random movement that does not fit in with the dialog.

imran younas butt:

need work on facial expression
need also poses