Comments:
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Harishankar Thiyagarajan:
It started good. The poses are fine and then the action went jumping. Character doesn't have to move continuously. It looks like you have to work that on the graph. You have to show the action separately. Body
Melissa:
When he says "i realize at that point " , what he is doing with his body needs some work (it doesnt look reel )
Carolyn Mennecke:
He moves a bit far and fast for "let me finish, okay?" Also, have him focus on one or two areas (off-screen person, computer, etc.) instead of all over the place
imran younas butt:
start was good..but in the middle of the animation ..little jerks
need adjustment
Nikolas Diamant:
The second shoulder shrug didn't work for me
Animator: Mike Park
Description: The new intern Jamie has constantly been suggesting topics to write in the daily web article and it's causing this individual to vent on another poor intern.
Experience: 2 to 2.5 years give or take.
Time taken: A good amount of hours each day for a week.