Dalton Krajewski:

The poses were excellent and they were paced in a good rhythm, but I feel like they hold for a bit too long in places and have transitions that are too linear, like when Malcolm is pounding his hand into his fist. The rhythm is there, but he seems to "hang" in place in a few places.

Harishankar Thiyagarajan:

The girl looks slow and fine. But the guys is sloppy. Focus more time on the poses next time, it will help you a lot.

behrouz:

i liked the body acting

Carolyn Mennecke:

The motion is too linear, and his finger shouldn't be bent backwards. But good choices for posing!

Steven GUardado:

the camera movement is very distracting.

Nikolas Diamant:

The sky looks out of place in the scene, but decent animation