Nathan Younger:

staging is awkward at first it looks like the bg character is tiny,

Dalton Krajewski:

The acting in this is very well done but the mouth seems a little out of sync in places. Part of me wants to say that some of the expressions are understated, and indeed the mouth may be, but another part of me really appreciates how beautifully subtle the emoting is and how skillfully it was handled, so this is fantastic work! :)

Harishankar Thiyagarajan:

What I like is: The actions, the camera angle where the other character is standing far away and he gives way to focus on the other character.

What could be changed: few Lipsyncs, looking too much at the screen and the dialogue is about printed the article..

Alexander Gray:

great work, the only critique I would say is that is face falls flat, he just need to have a little more emotion in there. Other than that this is great work.