Pauline Champetier:

Fixing the eye contact at the beginning of the scene would improve it a lot ! But nice work overall.

Steven GUardado:

lip sync is off in the second shot and the focus character seems to be overacting the dialogue.

Hailee Pullman:

Great poses and I love the contrast between the characters and the background.

Carolyn Mennecke:

Love the emotion in this one!

Alexander Gray:

superb work! the pose where he lifts his foot up and stomps down could be more pushed. The acting is great and the emotion is well shown in the scene.