Pauline Champetier:

Try to act out your scene if you haven't done it already, and think more about the mindset of your character. The chair spinning looks a bit disconnected from the thoughts of your character, the leg tapping at first as well. But if you think about the thought process and the "how will he do this or that because he feels that way and thinks that" you will come up with a truer performance.

Nathan Younger:

hand spins unnaturally

Steven GUardado:

too much overacting.

Dalton Krajewski:

I like the idea a lot! Some of the motions seemed much too fast, such as the chair spin, and other motions, like the shrugging of the shoulders, seemed disjointed from the rest of the body, like the limbs had minds of their own and were moving separately. Having more follow-through would help with this significantly. The poses were great :)

Harishankar Thiyagarajan:

Good Animation, you worked with the lip sync pretty decent - But, there are too many actions and it's confusing.

Carolyn Mennecke:

Take away a lot of unnecessary motion: the spinning chair, the camera movement, the jerky motions of the shoulders