Comments:
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Eric Raffle:
too jumpy i don't know what he is trying to do but its not moving realistically and too fast on some parts, you need to improve on anticipation , staging and acting.
Dalton Krajewski:
The arcs, poses, and timing were all fantastic! Some of the transitions seemed a little bit fast, though, and some extremes appeared to be over-acted, but dialing back some things very subtly and smoothing out a few motions would make this feel a lot more fluid! Gorgeous secondary motion on the hair, as well! :)
Harishankar Thiyagarajan:
Good, but the poses and timing could be improved. Focus more time on the poses.
SK:
Funny acting choices.
Animator: Kevin Roberts
Description: I wanted to try a 3d animation from a 2d perspective. What do you think?
Experience: student
Time taken: A few hours spread throughout the month.