Eric Raffle:

animation looks alright but your speech is off.

Dalton Krajewski:

The varied rhythm of this was wonderful to see! The poses and acting were very dynamic and expressive! The mouth seemed a bit rigid in some places, and I think that's mainly the held smile he does in the beginning. Some more varied lip movement could help, but all-in-all this is excellent!

Gayle Yeier:

I'm wondering what the story is behind this, but the animation is very solid and I love how you've pushed the expressions.

Léo Miche:

The animation of the boy at the begining is funny... But I doesn't match the audio...

Amartya Mukherji:

Hmm.... bishop is back in business. very nice. Liked it a lot. I loved the subtle movements of the dragon character.
The very first hip movement that you have given is not looking great to me. May be you should have delayed it. Or else you need to give proper follow-through of the upper body to justify the hip movement.

Carolyn Mennecke:

I like the last bit, from "cannot support your emotional handicap." But the man seems to change moods too quickly, from the dancing, fun guy, to the dead-serious one.