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Dalton Krajewski:
I enjoy the idea of this, though I feel the establishing shot in the beginning was unnecessary to tell the story. The lunge in at the end is great, but I think the biggest problem the animation faces at the moment is the rigidity of the characters. They seem very upright throughout, which can be helped by bending their backs into a c curve, even if it's subtle. This allows them to stand tall without seeming like they're being held up by strings.
Harishankar Thiyagarajan:
Work a lot on poses. Will definitely improve your animation.
Animator: Carl Yasudas
Description: Drama teacher demonstrates how the student should say the lines.
Experience: 2.7 years
Time taken: 2 weeks