Final Rating: 3.23. Finished 104 out of 138 entries.

342 views including the voting period.


Animator: Robyn Myers

Description: A father has a serious financial discussion with his daughter outside of a shopping mall. Aside from simplified background and props, looking for some solid animation feedback! Enjoy!

Experience: Student

Time taken: ~1 week


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The man's movements are interesting but he seems to jump from pose to pose with barely any smooth transition. The woman has poor lipsynching and moves too much at the end, the camera also jerks too much when it's going to reveal her bags.

Nathan Younger:

great movement

Dalton Krajewski:

The lip-syncing was superb! The mouth poses were very varied and emotive and the synchronization was right on the money. Some of the actions though seem like they need a bit of work. The poses don't seem to flow from one to another, rather they just shift without much direction or fluidity. Overall this is very well done though!

Harishankar Thiyagarajan:

Decent work. You have to very careful when animating Blake character as the head is too tall and arms are too skinny. They should look good.

Hailee Pullman:

Needs some fine tuning, it feels really loose as is but I can see where you are headed with it! Great job!