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Final Rating: 7.31. Finished 2 out of 138 entries.
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Description: At the office
Experience: 6 years
Time taken: 7 days evenings\nights
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The animation is very fluent, smooth and it bares a resemblance to what I have seen from the animation "the Iron Giant". A great use of movement and gestures which I sometimes find it hard to animate.
Solid entry! My only critique is the hold from 247-271 is a bit too long... I like that he holds the pose, but there should be some slight movement in there so he doesn't look frozen in time :)
We ve got a winner here :)
Great Job mon Gars !!!!!
This is number one for me! Very cool :)
This is terrific! The arcs are smooth and the actions flow together beautifully. The mouth seems slightly out of sync in the very beginning, but that's all I can nit-pick about this. It's absolutely fantastic!
Your acting is soo legit!! I love what you did with the hair when he said enabling, and I love how he was walking. Like each step and hand gesture emphasized the stress points in the dialogue. and how his eyes went the other direction in the "let me finnish ok?" part. He's so pogii!!! (handsome) Winner for me!!! <3
One of the best entries I've seen so far. Other than the obvious clean up I can't really critique it; the movement is wonderful, as is the lip sync. Good job!
One of the best entries ! Beautiful piece.
Wow, just wow. That was amazing!
wow.. this is so good. Loved it. Fantastic timing and arcs. So good to see such a nice clasical 2D entry. The Owl and weasel shot is another good 2D entry this month, but this one may be is even better. To me you are the WINNER this month. Wish you all the best
This is great! I love the poses, especially on "continue to support." Maybe add a blink or a moving hold when the woman is speaking, so he isn't standing completely still?