Hacho:

story confuses me

Justin H:

There's a certain level of follow through that is missing from the characters body language. They don't seem to really anticipate their movements quite as much as would be compelling. there are some moments I really like the moment @101 though. That's pretty hilarious to me.

Yev Rotar:

Interesting story. Work on shifting the wait from one foot to the other.

Cloud Wilk:

The switch between the two shots didn't make much sense with the dialogue. The effect is really nice, though.

Richard Carrillo Barrios:

what? haha

Hajar Khakrand:

So vague!! What is going on?

William Harrison:

The story is kind of confusing. I don't see why she would want to hit him with a club based off of the conversation they were having? There are also parts in the animation that seem kind of slow or robotic. For example, when the female is swinging the club it would probably be heavy and so it would slam down, or when she is moving to hide behind the egg the ik in the right hand is very obvious and makes it look unnatural along with the fact that the motion in the body is very linear. Try shooting a video of yourself hiding behind a wall, you would see the difference.

Sabrina Winkel:

What did I just watch?

Ankit Singh:

cool, you to little bhit snapy .. but story wise it's cool