Danny Kneip:

His performance is very strong and believable. Hers, not so much. I can see why you didn't cut back to her for the last line! lol Good job overall

Paul Von:

The set could use basic shading or colors to help the scene. Not sure why the door moves at the end. Not really sure about what the story is. Also, the main speaking voice is off screen an awfully long time. In spite of all these things I am still impressed by your poses and movement. With different staging and some conceptual planning I am sure you can score higher.

Cloud Wilk:

I do like the 'there was another chicken' bit. My biggest complaint is the large amount of empty space in the second shot.

Marcus Taylor:

I would point out the lips are moving before the audio starts.

Matthew Remer:

the lip sync is off in the beginning but other than that nice job

Richard Carrillo Barrios:

The expression where she asks "is this really happening" feels out of place beacause she does know it's happening, she is not actually wondering about it. So the apropiated expression there is like she can't believe what's happening or thinks it's too dumb of a situation. The expression you got there is someone who doesn't know what's happening. GJ anyways.

Sabrina Winkel:

The only positive was the man's emotions, and movements. And the camera. Everything else... Was bad