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Character moves a little to fast at times. A pause in camera movement around 66(?) would have been nice for the sake seeing the full pose.
Follow the basic rules
very nice this is the junxiao Chen ？
Interesting style. Your smears/jumps are a little too fast in my opinion, they're slightly too jarring at the moment to work the way you want them to.
Description: A boy who is intoxicated with singing！
Experience: 5 months
Time taken: 3 weeks