recording my life
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The animation is good you can improve the storytelling
Really nice, but the balance of your character is a bit off. Several times in your shot, we have the feeling is gonna fall.
Clever. By adding a layer of abstraction through the character's own camera lens, you can make his dance moves lame, and they will be not only acceptably, but appropriately so. Nice work.
Nice setup! The first big hand gestures on "see if you can spot him" happen a bit too explosively though and they don't feel all that natural. The lipsync on "shot him" needs work as well, you're missing a couple of mouth shapes and it should probably hit a lot harder than it does now.
Nice story and great facial expressions!
Description: Record your own video according to the song
Time taken: 30 days