Vincenzo:

The animation is good you can improve the storytelling

wahler Judith:

Really nice, but the balance of your character is a bit off. Several times in your shot, we have the feeling is gonna fall.

Hacho:

Great stuff!!

Brian W.:

Clever. By adding a layer of abstraction through the character's own camera lens, you can make his dance moves lame, and they will be not only acceptably, but appropriately so. Nice work.

Lea:

Nice setup! The first big hand gestures on "see if you can spot him" happen a bit too explosively though and they don't feel all that natural. The lipsync on "shot him" needs work as well, you're missing a couple of mouth shapes and it should probably hit a lot harder than it does now.

Barbara Laub:

Nice story and great facial expressions!