jem:

Characters are pretty static while waiting for their turn to speak. Love the blonde's movements!

Richard Adams:

I'd rate this higher if it were finished.

Craig Martin:

Nice! The great acting choices and I really felt the weight of the mother as she walked forward. Would have been nice to have both characters finished and moving the whole time but it would have taken a lot longer on what already looks like a decent amount of work.

Heba S:

The poses are really nice, but this is a tad over-acted. I really love what you were going for at the beginning where the blond lady comes up behind Abigail. At the start of 154, Abigail kind of swoops in awkwardly.

Sabrina:

Blue shirt girl has jerky movements. At first the redhead girl looks dead.. have her do more subtle movements instead of none at all

Yumeng Mortensen:

Maybe double check the spine of the girl on the left (looks like it either twisted too much or broke). I can tell you run out of the time but still I can see the mom/ woman on the right, she has good actions there but maybe try to straight up her spine ( maybe hunch over too much). I think if you have more time to finish it up it will be a good piece.

Fredrik Larsson:

Good that you kept the blocking. Decent blocking looks a lot better than lazy tangents.

Abhishek tiwari:

Needs a much better staging I feel. And the character closer to the camera is completely stuck for the first half. Nice effort though. All the best

Eric Buval:

Strong start

MarutiYemul:

Characters r so appealing....Excited to see final pass..