James Choi:

In the last shot there's way too much negative space on the left, and not enough of the right.

Sabrina:

Movement is too distracting and lip sync is off

Edd Jones:

Nice, but is floaty.

Fredrik Larsson:

Overall this is pretty good. The poses are a bit stiff and you haven't done much of weight shifting when you switch poses. Try to do a bit more elaborate blocking and rely less on tangents. Good work though, absolutely solid.

Jonny Strutt:

The actions and acting is thought through, but the rhythm of the actions and the intonation doesn't feel very natural with the words. I'd say rhythm is the key thing to work on in my opinion.