Final Rating: 3.83. Finished 42 out of 51 entries.

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Animator: Mudit Bhatnagar

Description: the mother is dating the daughters friend trudy.

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Time taken: 20 hrs


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Gaucelm De Villaret:

An interesting idea and nice staging, but it lacks animation.

Jonathan Fontaine:

You don't need the big camera move at the start, your staging is clear engough so we see the picture in the frame anyway

good story ;)

Kyra Simone:

Nice camerawork on the first section. The cut is very jarring. Probably need to pick one of the two shots at the end. Leave a little time after an action (mostly talking about the eyeroll at 115... and she reacts before her friend even says anything!) to help it set in. I like the subtlety of the poses of the first character but it can get jerky towards the edge of the shot.