Comments:
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:
I like the idea you're going with for the scene. It could really benefit from some mouth movement and better walking motion, however.
Gaucelm De Villaret:
Why didn't you animate mouths? If there was body language to go along with it, it could have compensated, but there isn't that...
Israel Silva:
This could have been great with the mouths. A big part of this competition and character animation for that matter, is lipsync! Keep up the good work.
Brian:
Looks like rough blocking but not finished.
Animator: Nathaniel Vaughan
Description: An clumsy work involving counseling from peers and known workers. Clearly unfinished and needs improvement. I won't sugarcoat it. At the very least it's better than nothing at all.
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: 48 hours and 38 minutes worktime.