Jonathan Fontaine:

Nice! i like ho it s not overacted, the last pose of the second girl is very good.. i don't get why you started with this camera movement.. it doesnt tell much and is a bit confusing.. Nice story too

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Good staging but not much acting.

Richard Adams:

Far too dim to see. Too dim to even tell if the animation is good or not. Couldn't tell what was on the trunk of the car.

Elisheva:

Needs better lighting.