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a good job but the acting is a little clumsy above all at the beginning
Add some overlap and hold on to the hand movement it feels like a robot arm, add some mouth shape for the lipsync.
Poses are good. Timing needs refining.
stop the jerky moment, and work on graph.
Description: He finally have the courage to talk to the girl who he keeps seeing at the library. He doesn't really get why he feels all fuzzy every time she smiles, but then it finally click....
Experience: Relatively new to the scene
Time taken: around half a month or more